ext_342915 ([identity profile] blcwriter.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] califmole 2009-08-29 02:58 pm (UTC)

Nicely done, I love the way you wove the present narrative & dialogue with the gradual reveal and rumination of the massacre. I'd love to see more from you.
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